A 3.5 campain

i should really start making my turns more descriptive

I think you're doing great...
Just...maybe use some punctuation and capitalization...
It'd be of lotsa help...

(Oh, and by the way, Zombielord. You said a baaad word... Ooooooh)

yeah ill try and start using a bit more

and soooo

Example!:
Original:
zen sits on his bead deep in thought. thinking of his life
being torn from his mother and father at the young age of 5.
being tortured and forced to fight and train with his young siblings and friends
till the age of 15. till he was put into the militia and forced into war having many of friends
die especialy one of his closets his brother shuko. (hint to justin for the side quest)
being killed by a evil man called bob a ballor his undead army was invaiding the lands of his fathers
and they were called into battle.back to back shuko and zen kill many undead and demons. then bob the ballor comes up from the ground and starts raining fire from the sky shuko decides to go off on his own and attempt to take him down not knowing that he stood no chance he charges screeming for
my fathers honor. zen screams in terror watching his brother being struck down with a crack of his fire whip and thrown down to the pits of hell.zen burst into a great rage he begins slaughtering all that he can.having being dragged away by twelve of his comrads. screaming and swearing that he will not rest till he brings bob down for what he has done.

(this is all being visualised in his head so if you have your detect thoughts on irene then you see all of this)

snapping outa trance zen grabs his sword and starts training intensly in his room.

Very slightly altered:
Zen is sitting on his bed, deep in thought, thinking of his life.
Being torn from his mother and father at the young age of 5;
Being tortured and forced to fight and train with his young siblings and friends till the age of 15.
Until he was put into the militia and forced into war, having many of his friends die, especially one of his closest, his brother, Shuko. (Hint to Dreem for the side quest)
Being killed by a evil man called, Bob, a balor.
His undead army was invading the lands of his fathers and they were called into battle.
Back to back, Shuko and Zen killed many undead and demons.
Then Bob the balor comes up from the ground and starts raining fire from the sky.
Shuko decides to go off on his own and attempt to take him down, not knowing that he stood no chance, he charges screaming for my fathers honor.
Zen screams in terror watching his brother being struck down with a crack of Bob's fire whip and thrown down to the pits of hell.
Zen bursts into a great rage. He begins slaughtering all that he can.
Having been dragged away by twelve of his comrades, screaming and swearing that he will not rest till he brings Bob down for what he has done.

(This is all being visualized in his head so if you have your detect thoughts on, Irene, then you see all of this.)

Snapping out of trance, Zen grabs his sword and starts training intensely in his room.

very good advice, view the power of the comma.

seems like the forum is at a extreme halt

We're waiting on our all powerful, Admin....
I believe.

i asked him to post today

*looks around and kills everyone in the room cause hes board*

Please there is an anouncement athe the capital building go and hear it. -sigh-

omg can someone one please post on the game

I just wanted to post here saying that I have been here everyday and can post...

I just really don't think there's much more I can say..
I think we're all ready, right?
Or is our DM wanting us to post that we all agree on the splitting up?
Or is he making sure everyone is up to speed and has read/understood all of our pages?

Just curious..

the dm was busy yesterday and didnt have the time to get on the computer, I will now do a summery post of the shopping trip and kick your asses out of town, or I will in a few hours check back occasonaly for the summery and the next thread going up.

[Here's a break down, for where we are.
Side note: Hanako will get her time when I feel it's time ^_^'

Aaanyway..here we go (this may get texty)
(This chart is to give everyone 8 hours of sleep, and assuming nobody need 'uninterrupted' sleep)

If person A and B (of letters A-E) stay up for the first 2 hours we get:
A - 0 hours of sleep
B - 0
C - 2
D - 2
E - 2

Then say C and D are next.

A - 2
B - 2
C - 2
D - 2
E - 4

Then we'll say A and E

A - 2
B - 4
C - 4
D - 4
E - 4

Then B and C

A - 4
B - 4
C - 4
D - 6
E - 6

Then D and E
A - 6
B - 6
C - 6
D - 6
E - 6

Than any other 2 who don't mind taking some final hours, such as A (sorry A) and C

A - 6
B - 8
C - 6
D - 8
E - 8

Then while A and C rest, the others can do watch (and since there are 3, and prep time may be taken over the duration of the 2 hours)

If anyone sees flaws (besides A probably being very cranky) or if someone is just willing to try it with the occasional single man at post, just..let us know! (here or in the other topic.)]

(sorry for dual post)

A can stay up for 4 hours. Then sleep for 8 hours. Then watch for 2. (Of 7 watches, that's numbers 1,2,and 7)
B can sleep for 8 hours. Then do watch for 6 hours. (Numbers 5,6, and 7)
C can stay up for 6 hours. Then sleep for 8. (1,2,3)
D can sleep for 6 hours. Then watch for 6 hours. Then rest another 2. (4,5,6)
E really only needs to do watches 3 and 4. But to be fair maybe also 5 or 7. That way its like this:
E Sleeps for 4 hours. Stays up for 4 or 6. Then Sleeps for 4 more hours. (Then maybe does 7 if they only watched for 4 hours) So.. (3,4,5 or 3,4,7)

Watches
1__________2__________3__________4__________5__________6__________7
A+C_______A+C________C+E________D+E_______B+D(E)_____B+D________A+B(E)

Then this gives us 2 hours of daily free time (resting during walks and prepping for spells and such if you don't do it during your watch) plus the regular 8 hours of walking. The whole venture of watch is 14 hours in length.)

This style gives us more, regular sleep patterns, eh?

If we do it this way, I would like to call E-watch for Hanako! (I'll be taking the 3,4,7 style so she can get ready during those last 2 hours)

Also, understand...
A doesn't do a watch with D.
B doesn't do a watch with C.

Yeah sure guys don't leave any scorpions for the guy who hates his trail rations! lol

Admin wrote:Yeah sure guys don't leave any scorpions for the guy who hates his trail rations! lol

How am I supposed to do that if you took the watch before me? Would you like me to warp the fabric of reality in order to send you food two hours before I woke up? Plus, I don't think you would eat something that came out of a glowing hole in the sky.

You could have put it in a doggy bag!

Still...having it in a doggy bag implies that he would have something to leave you...
the person who took a watch before him...

In short...go Kiz!, lol


(no harm meant to Jones...)

lol poor jones, im sure youll get a chance soon anyway. I havent posted the next day yet so that any of you can comment or question before we move on so your all not waiting on me unless no one has anything to say.

I, for one, don't have much to say else for our watch/waking up...
Unless I wanted to describe Hanako's morning routine in more detail...but I don't want to double post...

Also, to the rest of my group...
I made you breakfast and no one recognizes it!

eh, I was mostly waiting for questions on the corpse and if mike has the speak with dead spell maby questions For the corpse. but more charcter development scene's are always welcome so whatever works.

TwistingChaos,HiddenDreem wrote:eh, I was mostly waiting for questions on the corpse and if mike has the speak with dead spell maby questions For the corpse. but more charcter development scene's are always welcome so whatever works.

Unfortunatly for us, I don't have access to that spell until next level. So, no doing right now. (unless the DM decides to spot me about 3.5 thousand XP, which, you know, I'm cool with ) But for now, all I can do is help gather clues and guess what happened.

Eh.. thats too bad I suppose you will have to do it the hard way then or we can just move on to the next bit it dosnt matter too much to me. So is marshall ever going to post, hes the one im waiting on after all unless he has nothing to say? Im praying we dont have any of these hold ups in the middle of a combat cus that would suck alot.

I apologize for my "lack" of activity lately.
I haven't been near my computer, nor have I really had anything to say at this moment.
(I am kinda waiting to hear what Zen has to say about the body, or Jones, assuming they might know anything.)

When available, I do check here, I'm just very sorry that I haven't been as active as usual...